Posts tagged ‘revising’

28 April, 2011

Flotsam and Jetsam

Sometimes the most entertaining lines get cut in the revision process:

“Ah, well. I’d promise you all sorts of sexual favors… but we wouldn’t want to scandalize the deans or anything,” she smiled again and kissed his cheek. “Please get up?” She asked, widening her eyes.

“What’ve the deans to do with sexual favors? I certainly don’t want to see that. Or receive that. Or give that,” he murmured sleepily. “Really, nothing to do with that.”